Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Gallery Final Essay


Rochell Battle
ENC1102
Professor Warren
28 January 2013
Art is full of different colors

On January 15, 2013, I visited an art gallery that was created by people that had been in a college-wide Photography Competition. As I began to walk through the art gallery, I saw beautiful pictures that were colorful and old time black and white. There were three pictures that caught my attention therefore I decided to use the three eye catching pictures. My first picture was “Mini Jax”, which caught my attention because it reminded me of the beautiful background colors in the downtown area. My second picture was City Life”, it really caught my attention because the picture represents the area that I grow up in. The last picture was “The Entrance”, this was a bright pink picture that describes a man with a gun to the back of a women head.
“The camera is a tool that allows you to see with your soul”, this quote was written by Rob Gibson.
The first picture that I chose was “Mini Jax” by John Shippee. Looking at this picture, I knew what this was and also thought about writing about it.  When I look at the picture it was were colorful. This picture was filling with a brown and also with a little off white color. The buildings were tall and also level with many windows all over the building.  Is very colorful and also looks like a place called downtown Jacksonville. I really like this picture because of the colors and the buildings are made just like the ones Downtown. I like a colorful picture that I can look at and explain the picture in details. The road is made the same way downtown and with the same colors. I see that it has a bank. It looks like the JEA building that is brown. This is a fine piece of art you have a good view to what’s going on and could tell good details.
This second picture that I chose was “City life” by Charde’ laRoche. When I first saw this picture I felt like this is where I live and this is so beautiful.  I chose this picture because we stay in the city every day. The clouds are beautiful and blue with a little red inside. The buildings are the same color as the buildings downtown. I like this photo because of the colors they use, are as downtown. The bridge that I see in this picture is called the Main Street Bridge. You also see the landing in the picture that has the same color red and a shade of white color. In this picture you also see the big Wells Fargo bank logo on the top of the building.  
The last picture that I chose was “The Entrance” by Susan Tassin. When I first saw this picture all I could think was wow. What is going on? And why would somebody do that to her in her house I would have been scared. I dislike this picture because of the looks on it that someone is behind a lady holding a gun. This picture is filling of colors like a red and brown and a white that’s come from the book that she was reading. It has me thinking how this person ended up like they did. This picture looks like that someone could come inside the area without her knowing. She is reading a book so she could have been into the book and wasn't paying attention to anything. She may not have known that someone was there and someone was just playing that she was reading and nothing could happen. I would really like to know the whole story about this picture and the true details. I would have been scared if somebody would have done that to me. I would like to know what happens after that and more details.
In conclusion, I felt like all my pictures had some type of meaning. The Mini Jax picture is an outline of the Jacksonville downtown area. I also liked the “City Life” picture because it describes business offices, bridges and more of the downtown area. The last picture that caught my attention was “The Entrance”, this particular picture had a criminal background. This picture was examined to be a mug shot of an undercover man that came up behind an innocent woman while she was reading a book. Overall the three beautiful pictures had meaning to them. They all express different meanings but they shared some of the same concepts towards real world.
     

Monday, January 14, 2013

Journal Entry 1


My experience that I had in ENC1101 it was good but the teacher was a little bit more about reading and writing a paper and also doing work out of the book. The work that we did in the class mostly came out of the book, and also writing essay and doing homework. My teacher was a little laid back so we really didn't have much work. I did a lot of peer reviews with our essays. I feel that I gain a little more knowledge in high school than college. It was a review. I also learn how to write in APA, MLA style and also learning how to cite things but I still need a little bit of a review. My class was structured while the teacher used to stand up in front of the class and read from the book and tell us what to do. I need assistance with writing more using big words and also making my vocabulary longer. When I start writing I start at a good point and end up in another land. I have a bad habit into just writing about the topic. I don’t think that I really learned a lot in my first English class like I should have. I wish I could learn more in English instead of a teacher just making me write papers and standing in front of me. I really don’t remember anything so it would be helpful if I could get a review and a good understanding about English.